Thread:Valeyard6282/@comment-29977256-20171215001120/@comment-29977256-20180809192515

Ok, it looks good just two things:

It seems kind of short, now that's fine I just thought it would be longer.

Your plans for Jean-Paul Valley seem very different for what I had in mind. I was thinking that Jean-Paul was going to become Azrael waaay down the line. (he's also younger) I think we could have it so that he could be named after or related to Father Jean-Paul Valley and that's why they have the same name. Whatever works for you.

You can post it now.